Kia Ora Diamond, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a beautifully designed Christmas post. Did you design it yourself? It looks incredible! I like how you have used a variety of colours and I especially like the sleigh and reindeer flying across the picture. You definitely have a talent for making eye catching blog posts!
I notice you put your name into the Christmas baubles and while it looks super cool, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. It’s okay to include your first name, but could you please take out your last name and maybe you could put stars or hearts in the extra baubles instead.
I also see that your blog post cuts off at the end. Did you upload everything you meant to or perhaps did you miss the ending?
Happy blogging and keep up and keep up the exceptional work!
Kia Ora Diamond, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully designed Christmas post. Did you design it yourself? It looks incredible! I like how you have used a variety of colours and I especially like the sleigh and reindeer flying across the picture. You definitely have a talent for making eye catching blog posts!
I notice you put your name into the Christmas baubles and while it looks super cool, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. It’s okay to include your first name, but could you please take out your last name and maybe you could put stars or hearts in the extra baubles instead.
I also see that your blog post cuts off at the end. Did you upload everything you meant to or perhaps did you miss the ending?
Happy blogging and keep up and keep up the exceptional work!
Mā te wā
Shannon
Hi Diamond this is Neha from Edmund Hillary School. The work you did is good but I think you should finish your work before posting it. Keep working.
ReplyDeleteHi im Faafua from edmund hillary school your work was great but can you write more and finish it pls thank you loved it
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